Saturday, September 27, 2008

revised:
i think i like the version without the bars better but i'm not sure...

old version:
revised:
for this one, i'm liking the older version better. i'm going to have to try and figure out how to make this work.

old version:



more coming!

2 comments:

............................ said...

take the bars out.

all of them.

and take the grid off

and then let's see.

bring up the piece you posted on the 14th.

overall, the "book" will still need work, but it's coming.

remember to use the typography to accent, illustrate, balance, etc.

don't rely on bars and other graphic elements to do the work the typography should.

g.

Louis Rivera said...

lovely but i think some of your new spreads deviate from the first two a little maybe combine elemnts from both sets to create a medium